Through the Looking Glass
Group 4: Necie Lewis, Ashley Marotta, Aleksandra Sikanja, Allison Thornton, Nicole Long
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
Yay we all are finally finished with blogging and most importantly!.....PAPERS!!! ... Well at least until English 1102 starts! lol I'm still struggling with my final paper but hopefully after my one on one with ms. Marshall I will know what to improve on... and hopefully it will help me finalize my paper once and for all!!! this class definitely helped me improve as a writer! specially the creative part of writing! I cant wait to see my final grade for this class! I'm excited but nervous at the same time. I feel like this paper could either make or break me... well shall see lol. BYE BYE blogg
Our LAST Blog !

Salud!
Ahhh! Ha this is our last blog entry :)
I am glad that we had the one-on-one time with Ms. Marshall to discuss our final papers. I think that it will really help me when i go to edit my paper. I have realized that one of my week spots is transitions. Reading over my paper I now see how choppy each of my paragraphs are. But luckily, there is nothing extremely wrong with the basis and concepts of my paper, which makes me feel somewhat confident. :)
Overall, I think that my writing has progressed a lot through this semester. I went back and read my first paper and saw many things that I would have done differently. So in the future I know that my writing will continue to get even stronger. Maybe one day I will even learn grammar! But I doubt it... haha I only have to make it through one more semester of english because I am a biology major. It will be great though!
So here's to a great future of imporvement in writing!
Good bye blog :)
Thursday, November 25, 2010
Happy Thanksgiving!
First off, I just wanted to wish everyone a Happy Thanksgiving and I hope everyone enjoys stuffing their face today! I am not sure if we are suppose to do a blog today but hey I'd rather be safe than sorry. Anyways, I am so glad I finished my draft! Such a huge relief. Although I know there are major grammatical errors, I still have time to fix them. I only reached 5 pages which is weird for me because I usually go past the required page length. I realized that I still need to add some paragraphs in and everything so I should have it a little longer before the final draft is due. I am not sure if I did everything correctly though, I pretty much used my own beliefs and knowledge about the topic and found facts to support me. I am not to familiar with research papers, so I hope I did it right! Well, I cant think of anything else to write because I am soooo hungry and can not wait for dinner! ENJOY!!! :)
Tuesday, November 23, 2010
Lack of Research
Okay, so I've missed 3 blogs so I must say that I am extremely grateful that Ms.Marshall is letting this one count as a replacement for any missed ones! Now I've only missed 2 and so I will have a 100% as long as I don't miss any more! (: Anyway, so I finished my rough drraft yesterday and I didn't realize the lack of research that i had in my RESEARCH PAPER. I thought that I did a good job before we did the in class exercise that showed me how much more opinion than I had of facts. I'm not that worried though, because I'm looking forward to the student confrences were I am able to sit with Ms.Marshall and ask her questions and find out how I can better my paper to 'A' material. I also plan on visiting the writing center atleast three times before I turn in my final. I really really really want an 'A' on this paper so I can get a 'A' in this class...and I'm going to do everything that I have to do to get it! (: Happy Thanksgiving girls !
Turk-kayyyyy

Thursday, November 18, 2010
Progress Finally!

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